June 10th & 17th, 2019 - The Children

 

Dear TNY,

“The Children”.

I made it less than 700 words into this.  This is straight up novice-ass, fucking trash.  How many characters are there?  I can’t be bothered to count.  Nor can I be bothered to waste more time with this amateur-hour bullshit.  I will leave you with my notes, though, because that seems like the right move.

Fuck yeah, three characters in the first sentence!  Baller as fuck!

No fucking clue how many characters there are.  Good news, though.  I don’t fucking care about any of them so it doesn’t really matter.

Fuck my face.  No no no no no no no.

Summary and more characters!  Fuck yes!

Fuck this.  I’m not being paid to read this, and even if I was I wouldn’t finish.

Nick

 
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